Post by John Helmer on Aug 20, 2010 14:39:02 GMT -5
Here is part one of the multi-part webcomic titled "Rivisions"
Scripted by John Michael Helmer
With art by Spain's Antonio Lamas
Skywatcher
By John Michael Helmer
8/20/2010
Part 1
Panel 1
TITLE: Skywatcher
CAPTION: Alien Investigation Division, Phoenix Arizona…
Wide shot of an executive office. The room is nearly empty, except for large desk, a small bookshelf, and a picture of Jack Rinard and the president shaking hands. Sitting at his desk, Jack Rinard flips through a manila file marked PROJECT SPYGLASS.
RINARD: Bill, I want you to bring in a man called Justin Dane.
JOHNSON: (off panel) How many men do I need?
Panel 2
Rinard stands up and hands the file to Bill Johnson.
RINARD: Take your entire team.
JOHNSON: All of them?
RINARD: Yes, ALL of them.
Panel 3
Close up of Johnson reading the file.
JOHNSON: Justin Dane. Age: 35, Occupation: former government department head. Additional: ---believes he’s an alien trapped in a human body?
JOHNSON: (continued) He’s insane!
Panel 4
Tight shot of Rinard. Show the rows of wrinkles that suggest years of endless hours of overwork. His eyes have bags and black circles surrounding hid tired, weary pupils.
RINARD: I’m afraid there’s more.
RINARD: Kane knows a lot about alien investigations.
RINARD: He used to be the director of this division!
Scripted by John Michael Helmer
With art by Spain's Antonio Lamas
Skywatcher
By John Michael Helmer
8/20/2010
Part 1
Panel 1
TITLE: Skywatcher
CAPTION: Alien Investigation Division, Phoenix Arizona…
Wide shot of an executive office. The room is nearly empty, except for large desk, a small bookshelf, and a picture of Jack Rinard and the president shaking hands. Sitting at his desk, Jack Rinard flips through a manila file marked PROJECT SPYGLASS.
RINARD: Bill, I want you to bring in a man called Justin Dane.
JOHNSON: (off panel) How many men do I need?
Panel 2
Rinard stands up and hands the file to Bill Johnson.
RINARD: Take your entire team.
JOHNSON: All of them?
RINARD: Yes, ALL of them.
Panel 3
Close up of Johnson reading the file.
JOHNSON: Justin Dane. Age: 35, Occupation: former government department head. Additional: ---believes he’s an alien trapped in a human body?
JOHNSON: (continued) He’s insane!
Panel 4
Tight shot of Rinard. Show the rows of wrinkles that suggest years of endless hours of overwork. His eyes have bags and black circles surrounding hid tired, weary pupils.
RINARD: I’m afraid there’s more.
RINARD: Kane knows a lot about alien investigations.
RINARD: He used to be the director of this division!